
Squeeing: This fic gets a gold star for its use of all the characters - it portrays them all dead-on, especially Watanuki.
The author manages to capture Watanuki's spazz-tastic personality perfectly, using the capslock key with style. I couldn't stop grinning through the whole fic, and I ended up with a satisfying mushy feeling at the end.
Excerpt: “Did it show her love?”
Sputtering, Watanuki clutched the tray to his chest, shouting, “It showed incompetence!”
And gathering herself up enough to made a pass at the mochi and tea, Yuuko laughed, saying, “You must be more generous, Watanuki—not everybody makes such a good wife as you."